You ought to duplicate panel 16 and place it between 15 and 17 so that the storyboards read more clearly. The zoom in panels 19 & 20 is quite extreme, and at 21 you are cutting back to a framing that is similar to the start of the camera move, which could be awkward depending on the timing. Panel 23 is a similar framing to 19 & 20, but evidently it is a different room. Beware of any lines which are parallel to screen edge or which lead to the corners.
You ought to duplicate panel 16 and place it between 15 and 17 so that the storyboards read more clearly. The zoom in panels 19 & 20 is quite extreme, and at 21 you are cutting back to a framing that is similar to the start of the camera move, which could be awkward depending on the timing. Panel 23 is a similar framing to 19 & 20, but evidently it is a different room. Beware of any lines which are parallel to screen edge or which lead to the corners.
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